Friday 9 April 2010


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  1. These are very strong. The illustrations that use lots of snippets of type are working well. The bigger blocks of type need re-working, maybe incorporate the hand rendered stencil efforts as they are looking great.

    Re-consider the layouts too. there is a need for more negative space. The illustrations are looking very interesting but need breathing space.

    I can't help thinking that what the Russian Constructivist's didn't have was access to apple Mac's!!! So try and implement something from them. They would make very strong animations to compliment the illustrations - please consider who you would like to exhibit these...

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